Ahmeman1's Fotothing

great way to show movement!

It's a good shot. The one thing I don't like about it though is that the girl's hand is cropped out of the picture.

anon20 yes I agree I should not have cropped her hand out of the photo (work in progress) :-)

I really liked the motion of her hair. Maybe try turning the camera sideways for a vertical position shot. This will help bring the girl's whole body into the picture. You might even be able to capture her legs in motion as well. Overall, good attempt. I believe that we can never fully learn everything there is about taking pictures and advice always helps you look at situations in a new way.

Thanks for the advice cmurtos!